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A single coin is tossed in the air.
It may land on hope, or fall on despair.
A choice between two, just one is essential.
One is life crushing, one full of potential.
Some will claim luck, either bad or good.
Others say fate, the cosmos knew it would.
There's those who have faith, who wish for the grand,
But that hope is empty if Life dealt a bad hand.
Some will give up and fold with their life.
Others keep trying and pull through the strife.
There will be prospers, there will be fails.
The coin is now falling... will it land on heads or tails?
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Today I woke up knowing that I would find out information in the evening that would determine my happiness for a long time. i spent the entire day stressing over it, hoping for good luck, and wishing on 11:11. It was then that I realized that the determining's outcome was already decide, i just didnt know about it yet. It got me thinking about the existence of luck and fate as well as that the world doesn't change because I learn new information that already existed. Unfortunately things did not go my way and I wrote this to distract myself

MASSIVE EDIT: i just found the original writing of this that i did and i realized i left out the 9th and 10th line and just added them in.
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~johnluke728 May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A nice theme, and thoughtfully composed too. ^o^ (Which had me rereading a couple lines before moving onto the next, something I only do when I'm reading a well-written book. XD)
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~Blaiseblue Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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~nostrovia-poetry Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry, but you nailed using the rhymes to build up your poem. Good work!
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Short, sweet, so filled with depth.
The rhymes are so exquisite adding a different dimension. The words so carefully chosen are simply so delicious.
Love the ending part, rendering it as mysterious as it was meant to be.
Beautifully written, so delightful to read and ponder of what life may bring.
Well done ^.^
This is perfection in all it's glory.
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~RyosukeHikashu Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :D
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:iconkerriaa1:
You are very welcome ^.^
I also checked the rest of your work and it is truly a delight to read.
Keep up the good work ^.^
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~Moonlightauthor Jan 31, 2013  Student Writer
Lovely piece, and such a wonderful rhyming scheme! Keep up the superb work! :la:
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~RyosukeHikashu Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks a lot, i appreciate it :)
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~Moonlightauthor Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
No problem. c:
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